Question by Sebastian M: Please give me tips on this awesome RAP ive written!?
I’ve written this bad boy tune for my friends birthday and i’d like to be given feedback. it’s pretty simple in terms of how its rapped:
I’m gonna talk about my sweet car first, its a skoda
there’s something in the boot ommiting a strange odour,
the engine sounds similar to a school science lab motor,
and the interior is just about as cool as the owner.
my car usually starts unless its too cold or wet,
the body work is solid, but with signs of neglect,
other road users shouldn’t consider me a threat,
because it does nought to sixty in… i haven’t got there yet.
my car looks so bad, it’s like coming to black tie in Nikes,
its got the raw torque and power of a kid flying a kite.
but having a car is something that the ladies quite like,
so the back seats contain more semen than beijing contains bikes!
in fact the ladies really love it, and as you can see,
i’m full of ways of getting ladies to fornicate with me,
and ive got great pick up lines too, they work, you’ll agree,
so if you want to pick up women listen carefully:
baby, you’re perfect, you’re exactly what i want
are you with a sexual terrorist, ‘caus you’re a sex bomb,
when i first caught your eye all i could say was ding dong,
and if you were a car door, i’d slam you all night long.
i hope you listened carefully to those lines i just sunk,
‘caus those lines are the keys to getting girls in your bunk.
see i’m successful, but that’s partly down to being a hunk,
i score with girls as much as micheal jordan makes slam dunks.
In case you hadn’t heard, i’m working at waitrose now,
which means i’m earning in excess of five pounds per hour!
power equals money, and money is power,
my wallet’s so fat, when i sit down, i’m high as a tower.
i’m the king of my hood, and i’ll out-reign clouds by far,
i’ve got more greece than athens because of the slickness of my car,
i’m so damn fine i outshine the north star,
and my income’s so huge, i’ve got more czechs than prague.
Best answer:
Answer by Mark Sake(Is Back In The Game)
WOW.
Self-absorbed or you just like your car alot?
@ Nas troll: I’d say i beat you, you were just talkin’ sh*t that wasn’t true. Matter of fact you deleted the Q so no one can actually judge.
smh @ Nas wannabes.
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